[Custom Race] Elzenkar Bureaucrats

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Grummore
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[Custom Race] Elzenkar Bureaucrats

Post by Grummore » September 19th, 2014, 2:12 pm

Game in --> For the Good of the Commonwealth (Xxcha)
Working on --> Stargates variant for Vassal

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Re: [Custom Race] Elzenkar Bureaucrats

Post by War Man » September 21st, 2014, 6:46 pm

Um, I don't mean to be a spelling nazi or anything, but you spelled "inexperienced" wrong in the 7th line going over the race's history.

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Re: [Custom Race] Elzenkar Bureaucrats

Post by Grummore » September 22nd, 2014, 1:23 pm

I am not an english native speaker/writer.

Soooo, I'd be more than please is someone point me my mistake or modify the text to make it better!
Game in --> For the Good of the Commonwealth (Xxcha)
Working on --> Stargates variant for Vassal

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